Linda Studley

Can't Put the Pen Down…

Free the Muse – Cage the Critic


You will see a lot more activity on this blog in the coming year. I will be posting a new poem here every morning.

I hope you will join me on this quest to free the creative muse and cage the internal critic.

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One thought on “Free the Muse – Cage the Critic

  1. Tony Crafter on said:

    You recently discussed poem-anagrams, and I mentioned the fact that I’d anagrammed Kipling’s ‘Mandalay’ into an alternative poem. I won’t bore you with it here (!) but I would like to share, if I may, an anagram that I created from the classic eulogy poem ‘Do Not Stand At My Grave and Weep’. I won’t make a habit of plagueing you with my anagrams but this one is quite special to me as, after it was printed in the Daily Mail (a UK daily newspaper) I received numerous letters and emails from Mail readers saying how it had moved them. Writing free verse does not come easily to me but when I am creating an anagram of an existing poem, the self-imposed constraint of only having certain letters avaliable to me throws up ideas and areas of creativity that would never have occurred to me. All my ‘poemagrams’ are run through a computerised anagram-checking program to ensure they are authentic anagrams. I hope you don’t mind me sharing this with you, and if this is not the forum for doing so then I apologise.
    The original poem appears first followed by my anagrammed poem (after the = sign) By the way, i do not specialise in somber stuff, I do write humorous verse as well!

    Do not stand at my grave and weep,
    I am not there I do not sleep,
    I am a thousand winds that blow,
    I am the diamond glints on snow,
    I am the sun on ripened grain,
    I am the gentle autumn rain,
    When you awaken in the morning’s hush
    I am the swift uplifting rush
    Of quiet birds in circled flight,
    I am the soft stars that shine at night.
    Do not stand at my grave and cry,
    I am not there; I did not die.

    =

    The sunlight hits your photograph
    And memories stir and start to dance,
    I let the quietness linger then,
    The moment fades, but not the pain
    That hides within, it’s undiminishing,
    A format never finishing,
    Distained and flat, a stone-hard fact…
    Now, as rain drums on my window pane,
    A dormant mind-light glows again,
    And I believe I can make it through;
    You’d want me to.
    You’d want me to.

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