A New Poem Every Morning / Poetry / Writings Surface Tension October 27, 2012 lindastudley2 Comments Your aura contracts and pain skates across your face like a water bug. #308 Share this: Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email Like Loading...
The phrase ‘pain skates across your face like a waterbug’ is mesmerzing. Whose pain? Why are they in pain? Are they masking the pain? Is the viewer sympathetic or secretly enjoying. Just brilliant! LikeLike Reply
The phrase ‘pain skates across your face like a waterbug’ is mesmerzing. Whose pain? Why are they in pain? Are they masking the pain? Is the viewer sympathetic or secretly enjoying. Just brilliant!
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Thank you ma’m. I guess I have my moments 🙂
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