Your aura contracts
and pain skates across your face
like a water bug.
The phrase ‘pain skates across your face like a waterbug’ is mesmerzing. Whose pain? Why are they in pain? Are they masking the pain? Is the viewer sympathetic or secretly enjoying. Just brilliant!
Thank you ma’m. I guess I have my moments 🙂
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Linda Studley is a writer, songwriter, independent recording artist, and sometime graphic artist living in Northern BC, Canada