Ice crackles and pops
‘neath the tires of the car.
Nature’s bubble wrap.
#318
- Comment
- Reblog
-
Subscribe
Subscribed
Already have a WordPress.com account? Log in now.
Ice crackles and pops
‘neath the tires of the car.
Nature’s bubble wrap.
#318
Linda Studley 
Nice!
By the way, by putting ‘neath instead of ‘beneath’ you stopped it being a traditional haiku. Was that intentional to show that haiku who’s boss, Linda? (!)
LikeLike
actually, counting tires as two syllables, makes 7 in all… I guess Haiku is boss after all!
LikeLike
Ah, fair enough. I was counting tires as 1 syllable.
Haikus Rule!
LikeLike
Ha, good image. More like vacuum seal over here in the valley though 🙂
LikeLike