I have never heard
a better reason to wake
than the redwing’s song.
divine barrage, and a song,
the sweet tweet hovers.
the second haiku is an anagram of the first while still holding to the 5-7-5 syllable form.
Just seen this. Brilliant! You’ve taken to this anagramming lark* like a duck* to water! It is great fun and as you’ve no doubt found, it opens the door to creative though processes you may not otherwise have thought of 🙂
PS: You should post these on the anagrammy forum.
* My feeble attempt to continue the bird theme of your haikus.
We get ducks on the dugout too…
Yes, I’ll put it up on the anagrammy forum asap.
wow, that’s really quite impressive
Thanks. You should see some of the anagramming they do over on the anagrammy.com website – phew! It is fun to do!